The magazine’s
editors letter writes in a way that sounds like a person talking to a friend
and using informal language. When they editor says “Let you have your very own
set of Youtuber emojis! WHAAAT”. This shows us about how the editor writes
using informal language and addressed the reader directly by adding second
person pronouns such as “your”. This makes the reader believe that the reader
and the editor have a personal conversation making the reader feel important in
their own way. It somewhat encourages the reader to read on into the magazine
and maybe buy the next issue of the magazine when it is released by the
publisher.
The magazine’s
editor does not really welcome the reader into the magazine; they get to the
point of what is inside for example, the editor does not say hello or who they
are they tells us straightaway “what’s inside” and say “This issue we promise
we’ll…” meaning that the editor seems like they care more about their ongoing
readers and not new readers. By saying this, it does not really bring a very
good relationship between the editor and the new readers which is needed for
the magazine to be able to be successful with their readers. His also makes
the reader feel like they should just ignore the editor’s letter because it
does seem very welcoming and sounds like they magazine just want to publicises
themselves instead of making and building a relationship. Making the reader
believe that the attitude they have in the letter would represent the whole
magazine. Which it shouldn’t do. I believe for the editor to improve is that
they should add in a welcoming message as well as including all they
information and gossip they include in their magazine.

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